There’s a lot to like in your skiing — you are getting the ski engaged and carving nicely. And nice skis!
What is most obvious to me is the lack of movement in your skiing. You change edges quickly, establish edge, let the ski bend, but then just ride to late in the finish of the turn. I’d like to see if you could actually move move —. Build edge angle not simply at the initiation of the turn, but through the apex and maybe into the late shaping, then start the process of untipping the ski. While you may not wish to build the edge angles that are in the video below, notice how the skiers are almost always in motion — the legs are working independently, getting longer and shorter, but over the whole turn.