Alexz, you just wrote:
I was working with problems:
1. keep constant ski separation
2. faster transition with retraction
3. initiate change edge in transition from feet up
4. keep elbows narrower and lower
keeping focus on one of the issues during each segment.
Probably the next week I need to set main focus on shifting max pressure to earlier, closer to apex, and start flexion and transition earlier.
my comments:
1. stance width .... Yup.
2. faster initiations .... Can you do shorter radius turns? If so, good. If not, work on that, so Yup to this as well.
3. initiate with feet and legs .... Yup. Ankle-tipping inside the boot can come first, and some say this is the only way to start turns. A larger movement is leg action, which I focus on because we can see it and because it producdes reliable bigger effects. Initiating turns with either is good; tip at the ankles then work on the leg action, or work on leg action and use ankle-tipping as a supplement; see below for more of my thoughts on your leg action. As far as deleting the head-and-shouledrs-into-the-turn first, Yup, that needs to go and it looks like you've been working on it.
4. narrower arm position .... sure, do that too.
Now for the biggie: That part in dark blue in your last sentence ... it refers to something I noticed this time watching your new video. Do you think it's important where in the turn you "put" maximum pressure? I think you do. You are getting tall between turns, then dropping down to place "max pressure" on your outside ski at apex or thereabouts. After transition you drop low as if landing after a jump, and you lean in with torso aligned with outside leg you do this as - using your whole body to press outward on that outside ski, to max out the pressure under it. It looks like this is your intent in every turn, to place max pressure at some point near apex, and your words above seem to confirm that this is your intent.
Have I got this right?
If so, as you morph your turns into PSIA LIII-approved turns, you'll need to let go of this way of thinking altogether. You'll need to let go of the idea that it's your job to "pressure" (verb) the ski at some important point in each turn. You'll need to "allow" pressure to be strong at some point, while focusing on other things instead. This will be a paradigm shift in your thinking and in your movement patterns.
Skisailor is right, PSIA is looking for flexion turns. In such turns, the skier stays LOW in transition and does not pounce on the outside ski at apex or at any other time. The skier sinks low to initiate a turn instead of standing tall. The skier shortens the old outside leg/new inside leg to do this sinking, and leaves the old inside leg short; there's no way to get tall while doing this. As a result of the new inside leg shortening, the body moves downhill, crossing over the skis. The skier can hold the torso upright as this happens (you should), thus allowing angulation to grow as the turn progresses. The skis tip to new edges, turn downhill, and the skier keeps shortening that inside leg and tipping its ankle onto the little toe edge as the turn continues.
The skier lengthens the outside leg not to "pressure" it but to keep its ski in contact with the snow. You'll do this because your new outside leg knows what to do. Pressure will come to that ski on its own. The leg attached to that outside ski will be getting long as the pressure builds, the inside leg will be continually shortening and tipping onto its little toe edge. Hopefully your torso will be more upright than your legs, your "weight" will be directed onto that outside ski because of the torso not leaning in, and the outside ski will grip better than it currently does because of that angulation. You'll have your flexion turn. It will feel quite different; if it doesn't you aren't doing it yet.
This movement pattern can produce high edge angle carved turns, it can produce "steered" turns, it can produce slow basic parallel turns, it can do all kinds of things for you.
My guess is that you are not yet doing a flexion transition (this is the #3 type turn mentioned by SkiSailor/Ursula) because you still are thinking about "pressuring" that outside ski at apex, and to do that you need to pounce on it, so you go up in transition and come down at apex. When, instead, you simply shorten the new inside leg and leave the other leg short, you will be using a whole new movement pattern. You might need to try this out in non-threatening conditions since it will be so different. I hope you can find that on the glacier at this time of year.
SkiSailor is right on another point; you are a little aft. Someone else did mention it upthread, but I can't remember who. This video shows you from the side more so it shows up now. Pay special attention to holding/pulling your inside foot back. Using the flex-to-release movement pattern and letting go of the "pressuring" of the outside ski may help with the aftness; I'm not sure.
You are lucky to have Palmer glacier to ski on. Wish I were there too!